Ever have one of those moments of serendipity when the world seems to be encouraging you, or supporting you? Like when you’re looking for one thing at the store, but you get distracted and your gaze falls on a big pile of exactly what you were looking for in the clearance bin?
After being a bit (ha, a “bit” yeah, let’s call it that) disillusioned with where Corpse Blood has been going lately (come on, 52% request rate in the first 15 queries, then suddenly agents can’t even be bothered to respond at all?) I was determined to spend the day polishing up my query, synopsis and starting in on re-evaluation the manuscript itself.
I have a new query and synopsis and was going over the first three chapters for a new round of subs when I realized two things. One, I still believe in this novel, and further more I believe the writing (while it could use some tweaking) is solid. Two, the Cities of the Underworld marathon I’d been watching had turned into Modern Marvels. And the subject? Corpse Technology.
That’s right, I paused in editing to realize that there was a one hour show on morgues, mortuaries, what happens biologically after we die, etc on. Serendipitous.
And cooking. We’re doing Thanksgiving tomorrow because Jason is off work, and so that our friends (who are our real family) can join us and still spend time with their family too. Plus it’s game day anyway.
Pictures of our delicious mud pie and the rest of my book buying guide will be posted later this week. When I’m not so tired I can’t think straight.
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Any Given Doomsday, for better or worse is best summed up as what the Anita Blake series by Laurell K. Hamilton would be if all supernatural creatures (almost) were actually the spawn of fallen angels, left on Earth to challenge (aka slaughter) humankind.
The set up demands that readers accept the absolute existence of God and the Christian mythos, whereas most urban fantasies ask a reader to believe in the creature, but leave religion out of the picture. This can potentially bring Christian readers into urban fantasy, if they can get past the sex.
And the sex… is non-consenting. Definitely an aspect that will turn off many readers Elizabeth, the heroine, is drugged, and raped graphically multiple times within the book. This is completely forgivable (in the context of the story) because sex is vital to Elizabeth’s powers. While I normally avoid giving such blatant spoilers these I found particularly troubling.
The story itself starts when Elizabeth Phoenix finds her foster mother dying on floor of her home, attacked by something Elizabeth can’t explain. With a few cryptic words and a dark vision Ruthie passes something on to Elizabeth that lands Elizabeth in a coma. When she wakes up Elizabeth learns from her ex-coworkers, the Milwaukee PD, that her foster brother and ex-lover Jimmy is their number one suspect. Jimmy himself breaks the news that Ruthie passed her powers to Elizabeth, which makes Elizabeth obligated–for her own safety–to hunt down Ruthie’s killers. And Elizabeth isn’t just a seer, she’s THE prophesied seer, meant to be the most powerful one, a seer and a demon killer and the person who is supposed to lead the side of good in the war against the evil Nephalim.
Elizabeth’s complete lack of knowledge about the supernatural world does not set the story up in a good frame. Instead of being introduced to the rules of the magical world slowly it leads to the reader, like Elizabeth, to have no clue what’s going on, but being pressured to accept tension, and to see Elizabeth attacked with no real idea of how these things are important. The pacing is slow, the revelations convenient and Elizabeth herself is a much quieter, less dynamic urban fantasy character.
The pace is unsure, more than once a fact is hidden from the reader for effect, though the story is told in first person and Elizabeth herself already knows of it. Readers are never given a solid idea of the “rules” of magic and the paranormal because they seem cherry picked for effect rather than for character building. While all Nephalim are absolutely evil both men presented as love interests have Nephalim blood and Elizabeth herself may have (after all, she has everything else that might make her powerful, other than strength of personality).
Any Given Doomsday has action, but feels slow despite it, reluctant to participate in or commit itself to its own story. The similarities to other series and the Biblical/Apocalyptic set up could bring in a fan base, but many will find this book vapid and unsatisfying.
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Those with autism can have some amazing skills that they wouldn’t have if they were “cured”. For example, look what I found in my son’s room today:
Does it look familiar?
How about now?
He is amazingly good at drawing logos (especially for an 8 year old). If he sees something more than once he usually tries to draw it. The PBS and Paramount logos are his favorite lately, but NBC, Ford, 20th Century Fox and the History Channel also pop up here and there. We have a friend who is paying good money to learn to do what our son does naturally.
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Straight and simple books are among the most versitile gifts.
-Crunched for money? There are cheap paper backs ($2.99 for kids books and as low as $5.99 for adult paperbacks) or classy high quality paperbacks.
-Books are better for your than sugar-filled sweets and in some cases they probably taste better too.
-Books can be enjoyed over and over. Or enjoyed and passed on.
-Let’s face it it’s perfectly legal to sneak a peek or two (or 300 pages worth) at books you buy for other people. As long as you keep it in fantastic shape.
-There really are books out there for everyone, even people who don’t think they’d enjoy books. There are books on every topic, exploring every angle and every crevice of our lives. And for those who don’t like reading? There are lots of photo-based books that require no reading but still invoke a sense of awe.
-In times of stress (like recessions) what people need almost as much as jobs and money is an escape. Books ARE escapes.
These are just some of the reasons. Please, please consider buying books for the holidays.
Next week I’ll be posting my book guide for the holidays so come back then to see where to start if you want to give books.
(By the way, a gift card to a bookstore means that your friend or loved on can buy things other than books too. It might not help publishers, but it will help the bookstores.)
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