Review: City of Legends by Cheyanne Young

Where to start with this one. Maci Knight lives in a world where there are superheroes (they all pretty much have the same powers, speed, healing, strength, etc) and normal people. She’s not just from a superhero race, she’s the prized daughter of the Mayor of the Superheroes. She, like all members of her genetic race, has been training her whole life to become a hero like her older brother and her dad.

But right before she takes her final graduation tests she learns that she was born a twin (in a horribly stilted, cheesy way), and before her all twins born to the super race are killed because one always goes bad, and there is no way to tell which is which. The elders of the city are reluctant to let Maci become a hero and fail her… at which point Maci throws a fit and whines a whole lot about not getting her due.

There are some interesting ideas here. The concepts of supers and normals, and how supers are adored, but seem to look down on normals as frail and pitiful. The hero-worship culture, the normals being seen almost universally as lesser people who must be taken care of, and the tradition of killing all twins (except, of course, when the mayor had twins. Then he broke all the rules for his daughters. And this is the motivation for the bad guy.) even Maci’s own subconscious programming to only accept being a hero as a valid path in her life, to view other positions in the super city itself as lesser, inferior, all could have been very very interesting subtexts.

But instead there’s zero self awareness or introspection from our entitled, ill-tempered heroine. She doesn’t care why losing hero status gets such a reaction from her. She doesn’t wonder if her own narcissism is an issue, or even use learning that she is a twin to explore the idea of nurture over nature, or shades of gray in heroism. No, she just throws fits, breaks things, runs away, disobeys, defends the status quo, talks about how she deserves to be a hero because she’s the best, gets people killed(!)…

And in the end it’s almost like Maci manages to reach through the text and convince the author to give her what she wants. The cool guy likes her, even though she completely and totally looks down on him (he’s not a hero). One would think he’d get tired of hearing how being a hero is the only thing she ever wanted and she totally deserves it, when her behavior says different. And the bad guy, who is completely and totally justified in feeling ire and anger against a system (And the iconic head of that system) that slaughters twins without a thought, EXCEPT when the mayor breaks the rules for himself after he has literally demanded the death and torture of thousands of people for not fitting the super-society norms. In the end the author touches only a tiny bit on that conflict, then ham-handedly turns the villain into a cartoon, blindly cackling and being evil just because.

I almost quit reading this one a hundred pages in. The whining fit-,throwing from entitled Maci toned down after a while, but the story didn’t really redeem itself. If you want a Peep of a superhero story with battles, a villainous villain and a sassy hero, you might like this. If you prefer a complex meaty super tale, skip on, because this one avoids the most interesting parts of its own concept.